Week 10

Before editing I let a sample of 10 from my target audience view the clips I had filmed so far. They told me what they thought:

'they look good, they look real and quiet dramatic, the location is good, and it doesnt differ too much from your storyboard, the camera shot is good also'
'Would be better in black and white, and maybe you should slow it down to make it seem more emotional.'
'They are good actors, it looks real, I would have prefered a few close ups to see their faces, amotions.'

I wasnt sure wheter I should be focusing more on her performance in the video, or the storyline so I decided to get a wider variety of feedback.
I used opionionaided which is a popular site where people leave their quesions to get an answer.